My Ailment

Such a tormenting and hateful act,
In the heavens a very accepted fact, 
Love torments more than a tormenting plague, 
With such meaning awfully obscure and vague,

Once so pure thought to be,
Used in anger plaguing eternity,
Now a sin tormenting a pious fool,
A sin so aloof and used as a tool,

Tool of humans used as a weapon,
To lure, trap, and massacre in just a second, 
With nothing to lose but their own empathy,
Making hearts so sore existing solely for cruelty.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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July 27, 2016 at 3:57 AM
By the way Im Earn Dave Araneta .. please I need your reply :l
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July 25, 2016 at 7:25 PM
Hi angelus, can I have your profile? Because my teacher given me a task to criticize your poem including the authors profile. Please reply I really really need it .. Thank you :)
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