Darrin Funk Poet Rhyme

My Achilles

PHFFFT! *

The sound of peace
A sweet release
To La La lands
Where soothing hands
Calm the weary
Boost the dreary
Drown my sorrow
Until tomorrow
When once again
I'll wake and then

PHFFFT!


*This represents the sound of a beer bottle being opened

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Betty Johnson November 22, 2010 at 4:42 PM I actually DID laugh out loud! I love it!

Dr.Ram Mehta November 22, 2010 at 4:18 PM Very creative and interesting write My Achilles, Darrin

Poet Destroyer A November 22, 2010 at 4:09 PM wow ! Finally a short slam,, sure enjoyed yor word, here, lol,, to the sound of you drinking everyday,, well as the poem,goes,, enjoyed,..Miss P.D.