My 18 Year Old Son

N ever a harsh word spoken
I love you mom he says every day
C aring and considerate 
H appy and carefree
O n the ball about his chores
L ooking for food in the cupboard doors
A lways eating me out of house and home
S haring time with mom before he leaves home
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dufresne Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 6:02 PM
excellent poem. Very fine loving relationship well defined with these simple words in this Acrostic, Michelle.I enjoyed it -Robert
Mehta Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 5:31 PM
Fine use of alliteration and the feelings for the son
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