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My 18 Year Old Son

N ever a harsh word spoken I love you mom he says every day C aring and considerate H appy and carefree O n the ball about his chores L ooking for food in the cupboard doors A lways eating me out of house and home S haring time with mom before he leaves home

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/1/2010 6:02:00 PM
excellent poem. Very fine loving relationship well defined with these simple words in this Acrostic, Michelle.I enjoyed it -Robert
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Date: 5/1/2010 5:31:00 PM
Fine use of alliteration and the feelings for the son
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