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MUTE IN TRANCE OF RAPTURE
In the island of life I like to be soaked in drizzle of cool serenity, find at the still depth within a new me. Out of recluse it’s my reality, in lone insight I lose duality. As full moon moves slow across my sole sky dense night’s joyous stillness stardusts dilute, I drink eyeful while time passes me by. Mind gets drenched in delight passions elute, in charmed trance of rapture I become mute.
August 1, 2019 Syllable count : 10 each line (iambic pentameter) Checked on howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 8/6/2019 2:10:00 PM
your images, use of language and the flow all combine into a poetic masterpieces, beautifully penned poem~ :)
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Date: 8/1/2019 9:25:00 AM
Time weathers skin, not the knowledge gleaned within. This is beautiful Subimal! : ) xxoo
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