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Mute

Wordless and silent.
Verb archer on vacation.
Muse out for late lunch.

Copyright © Sue Mason | Year Posted 2010

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February 25, 2010 at 2:19 PM

very good write here i enjoyed it. Jo

February 1, 2010 at 6:47 PM

Love this. I can relate to my muse being out to lunch. WHAT A CREATIVE VIEW--one that writers surely will relate to. The second and third lines are just awesome. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comment. Keep up the good writing. Karen

January 31, 2010 at 11:15 AM

Smile, this is a very cool one Sue. Charming and witty! Sincerely, love Moses

Andrea Dietrich

January 30, 2010 at 4:48 PM

hahaha, not really funny for the writer, but the poem itself has a great little humor to it. Great title for it too, the mute muse!! Luv, andrea

Robert A. Dufresne

January 23, 2010 at 6:06 PM

Verb guy on same cruise with mine probably right along with those adverbially adjective nouns. Traitors all at times! Cool Senryu, Sue.- Robert

January 22, 2010 at 6:12 PM

Sue~Very good one filed with truths for all writer at one time of another! Laura :)

January 22, 2010 at 4:10 PM

Interesting write. I especially like the second line. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

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