Mustered Clouds

Morning stretch of light,
Clouds sliced by blades of pearled rays:
Sallow beginnings.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 1:05 AM
gosh, you must be posting stored up poems you have been writing. they are all much too good to have been written in one day. Or were they??
Moreno Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 2:30 AM
They are all new
Chircop Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 12:23 AM
Just beautiful...I ve read your other haiku too..I ll be back to comment later..Duty calls : )
Moreno Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 3:04 AM
Thanks Charmaine
Hicks Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 1:33 PM
It's a beautiful sight to see... those blades of light through the clouds. What a way to start the day methinks. Keep up the good work!
Moreno Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 3:04 AM
It's always a glorious sight to see, thanks!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 4:39 AM
I like this one very much Raul you paint a good picture here xx
Moreno Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 3:03 AM
Thank you Mandy
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