Must Kick the Habit

pyramid of cans
      stacked perfectly on display 
        crash ~ be still my heart
          

By 
David Kavanagh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 5:07 AM
Been there, done that - from the employee who stacked it's side, and from the side of a mother with a five year-old girl.
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 8:57 AM
Ha, There’s me thinking I’m the only one who likes to bring pyramids crashing down, my mother got barred from a shop over my mischief, cheers David
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