Notes About The Poem

Musing On the Scene Below Me

How lovely to spend time
On a hillock overlooking the bay!
The ruddy sun just warms enough,
So I’ll enjoy my perfect day.

The sea is not perfectly calm.
Waves roll towards the beach,
What are they whispering to the sand?
What thoughts I wish I could reach?

There on the other side of the lake shore,
I spy a fascinating pristine vale
White beeches cover most of the land,
Except for a cottage that stands in the dale.

It is the place I want  to go
So I take a leisurely walk 
Ignoring the restless harbour bars 
Avoiding friends who would want to talk.

The air is fresh in the awesome vale,
I watch a hawk attack a sparrow,
But my mind is on the cottage,
As I wend my way though it is narrow.

She must have sensed I was so near,
As she comes out and there we kiss.
I hear the dulcet sounds of mellow tunes
Euphoria reaches its peak, my mind in a mist.

Inside the cottage lavender perfumed,
She brings me the delicacy of an ambrosial repast.
Satiated we rest on a soft sofa 
My dearest love reaches its peak at last.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Poet Avatar
August 31, 2021 at 7:14 AM
Your poem sounded excellent, Victor. A perfect blend of images and metaphor makes the reader journey from beginning to end. Happily-ending, just as you've come to expect. This is to my fave.
Roper Avatar
August 31, 2021 at 6:44 AM
Great imagery of the scene and nature.. A touch of love.
Jayasankar Avatar
August 31, 2021 at 2:11 AM
It's a beautiful picture of the cottage... and your verse adds more beauty to that photo.. So romantic... Enjoyed reading Victor... God bless... ~ Ani
Cunningham Avatar
August 31, 2021 at 12:44 AM
Sounds a wonderful place to be Victor. Tom
Gilmour Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 3:30 PM
Beautifully written as you are drawn towards your true love - I love your line ' delicacy of ambrosial repast' wow... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Buehler Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 10:34 AM
That was quite a walk, and the setting was perfect for romance. Brilliant writing, Victor.
Skelly Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 8:11 AM
An ambrosial romance, very nice Victor…Delice
Pandit Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 5:41 AM
Enjoyed the tone of your poem, Victor. Perfectly romantic imagery draws the reader from start to finish. Rewarding ending. Excellent as always. Another FAVE for me.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 5:39 AM
A lovely walk. We wonder why you pass those friends who’d want to talk, but aha, it is the love you seek…the lavender perfume and ambrosial repast! Lovely!
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 3:12 AM
- The place and nature are like here at home :) - A beautiful and romantic poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 11:53 PM
Serene and perfect for a lovely romance, amazing how you write these, Victor:)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace