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Musing

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Musing I dream of places water-free, Tis home, truly, whence I abide, Shoreline water laps, constantly, Steadfast frolics, no compromise, Those like me and those diversely, Drift alive, nay thoughts suicide, Yon glass bowl fades my memory. 2020 February 24 Howmanysyllables; 7 lines x 8 syllables per = 56 syllables total

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Eve Roper
Date: 2/25/2020 1:11:00 AM
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Beautiful example for the contest, William. Great imagery and sweet flow.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 2/25/2020 6:56:00 AM
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My heartfelt thanks, Eve -- Aloha!~@wk

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