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i wil never be perfekt no mater how hardi trie. becuase i dont hav wat it taks to be loved. see, wenever i give my hart away its always pushed and shoved now its beeten and brused and seeled togeter with gloo cuase i couldnt find gum or tape but the hurt stil seepz through yet it doesnt bug you cause you dont consider it rape.
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Anderson Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 11:04 AM
you don't need spell check, shorty. i get it. this one almost broke my heart. very touching
Shahwan Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 9:24 AM
Unique. Pls retype it in Italian portraying the exact theme of it. May I suggest using the spell-check to gleam your beautiful poetry. I wish you all the best.
Guzzi Avatar
April 15, 2009 at 8:47 AM
good use of visual to put forth meaning. Light & Love
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
April 9, 2009 at 2:09 PM
Your poem shows so much emotion. Pain comes through loud and clear. I must say that you DO have what it takes to be loved. You have a sincere heart, feelings, and you are a child of God. Pray to find your one true mate. Then, if he is a righteous man, pains deep seated pains of rape, can be abolished by his tenderness. My prayers go with you. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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