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Music's Gift

Synchronising melodies are sounds that words could never be their operatic symphony is calmer than the bluest sea Now music in its purest form flows through me like a waterfall becoming a vibrant thunderstorm rearranging my minds thinking wall Some music sooths my metal strain while others wake my tired brain some music touches life's black holes and brightens up their very souls What prayer and music give to me is nothing short of harmony Like a honeybee, my pen is free to express what music means to me

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Skat A

Date: 2/26/2016 10:35:00 PM

alphonze aliandro, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/25/2016 5:53:00 AM

Alphonze,, Welcome to Poetry soup I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Other than that I will read, enjoy and comment with positive feedback. Remember, keep posting, stay in touch, TAP my shoulder when you have a new poem. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. You might find my support addictive. I've been a SOUP Poet for 6 years. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. I'm from Texas, How about you? Tell me a little about your poetic skills. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Pashang Salehi

Date: 2/25/2016 2:49:00 AM

That's nice... I understood your painting of music... music becomes a vibrant thunderstorm, rearrange my mind as well and guide me through it all.....

Alphonze Aliandro
Date: 4/14/2016 4:37:00 PM

My thoughts/mind is compared to the earth. Music is compared to the water cycle, from the moment it evaporates until the moment it becomes a thunder storm, im comparing this process to the process of how music evoces my thoughts. Rearranging my thinking wall represents the destructive power of a thunder storm on the earth and its ability to physically change the earth/train of thought. Basically music broadens my creative thought.