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Musical Melody

Retinked
Greatest sounding
Going beyond depressed
A melody peaceful unite
Uplift

Russell Sivey

Entrant into nette onclaud’s “MELODY OF CINQUAIN” contest!

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Dr.Ram Mehta

September 12, 2011 at 9:09 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Russell

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 12, 2011 at 9:22 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Melody Of Cinquain" contest Russell. Love, Carol

Charlotte Puddifoot

September 11, 2011 at 6:01 PM

congrats on another contest win, I recall reading this one before and predicting it would do well :-)

Kash Poet

September 11, 2011 at 4:26 PM

Russell,Congrats on your win with this beautiful write.

Sara Kendrick

September 11, 2011 at 3:31 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative musical work..Congrats...Sara

Lori Lucas Mcclure

September 11, 2011 at 3:05 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!!!!!!----Lori

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 10, 2011 at 11:40 PM

Congrats Russell on your sweet victory with this brilliant beauty in Cinquain luv... enjoy..

Lee Ramage

September 10, 2011 at 9:47 PM

Ah someone took at different take on this topic. Well done and congratulations in your placement. Lee

Caryl Ramsdale

September 10, 2011 at 9:08 PM

Tink-Tink reminded me of my little pink piano I played much when I was a little girl. To bad we had to change our first writes. Congratulations my friend. CR

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 10, 2011 at 7:15 PM

oh I see u had to revise also.. this form was more difficult than first thought.. I really liked the 'tink-tink" much better but sponsor is definite and she is a doll of a poet... I had to revise as well..luv..good luck..

Nette Onclaud

September 9, 2011 at 5:00 PM

soup mail.. and did haiku for you..:) huggs!

Nette Onclaud

September 9, 2011 at 3:36 AM

thanks for joining, russel... wow, thanks for joining...kindly check my new blog on cinquain reminder...good luck with huggs! :) nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 8, 2011 at 10:42 PM

super cool one Russell..luv the into line of tink-tink.. reminds me of piano days..luv.. good luck in this contest and oh yes..good luck in your first contest on PS.. enjoy the process and if u need any assistance..be happy to help luv.. posting my entry right now on this great theme..