Music to my ears

Velvety fog of night beckons
I hear you calling out my name
Echoes since you’ve been gone



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 3rd place 2025

grieflost lovemusicother

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sara Etgen-Baker

November 4, 2025 at 6:06 PM

this is beautiful in its own subtle way....makes one gasp a bit.

Line Gauthier

November 4, 2025 at 9:16 PM

Thanks, Sara ~ have a lovely day

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 4, 2025 at 11:15 AM

Hello Lin, do you know who itis calling out your name? In a dream i had long ago, the person said to me "i know you. " he knew my name. yet i did not know him. I am still waiting to see if i get this dream telling me who he is. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 5, 2025 at 10:29 AM

yes it is strange. Hugs./Darlene/

Line Gauthier

November 4, 2025 at 2:37 PM

Strange isn't it !