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Music of the Night

I searched for you
Followed in the wake of your song
The sillage of your sensual scent 
Long after the sun had lost its glow
I persisted, with cards in hand, 
Defying destiny, undeterred
By night and melancholy darkness.  

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“On Broadway” Contest
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
        Placed 1st
© 27th June, 2020

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Angela Crabtree

November 10, 2020 at 6:14 PM

A magnificent write, Paul. Follow the music... :)

Paul Callus

November 12, 2020 at 10:19 AM

Thank you, Angela. A pleasure to have you stopping by:) Regards // paul

Jack Horne

October 12, 2020 at 5:13 AM

so pleased - but not surprised at all - to see this was a big winner. Excellent write, as always, my friend

Paul Callus

October 12, 2020 at 8:40 AM

Thank you, Jack. You are too kind, my friend. Regards // paul

James Inman

August 25, 2020 at 6:13 PM

Never Give Up! The search goes on Paul. A wonderful write.

Paul Callus

August 26, 2020 at 12:29 AM

Thank you, James. Pleased to be sharing first place with you:) Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

August 25, 2020 at 2:47 PM

wow, so soulful and romantic. Congrats. Just love this.

Paul Callus

August 26, 2020 at 12:18 AM

I love your reaction and comments, Andrea...thank you!! Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith

August 24, 2020 at 10:34 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your pen had another wonderful write. Enjoy your win and day....................

Paul Callus

August 24, 2020 at 3:06 PM

That's very kind of you, Paula...thank you. Have a lovely day. Regards // paul

Sam Kauffman

August 23, 2020 at 12:28 PM

Paul, congratulations on your first place win. I love the phrase "in the wake of your song!" Brilliant imagery.

Paul Callus

August 23, 2020 at 12:43 PM

Thank you, Sam! I have read your winning entry...beautiful! Regards // paul

Lindsay Laurie

July 15, 2020 at 7:45 PM

Hello Paul ... you most certainly have a way about writing this topic in poetry. Very nice indeed - Lindsay

Paul Callus

July 16, 2020 at 10:27 AM

Thank you, Lindsay. Your words are most encouraging. Regards // paul

Jack Horne

July 10, 2020 at 2:54 PM

sad but very beautiful

Paul Callus

July 10, 2020 at 4:28 PM

Thank you, my friend! Hope you're keeping well. Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

July 4, 2020 at 10:17 AM

A romantic poem Paul and your images you create are etched with deep emotion. I'm certain Nette will love this write and best wishes, although I hardly feel you need them. Warm regards and hugs, Jenny.

Paul Callus

July 5, 2020 at 11:50 AM

Thank you so much, Jenny. Your comments and faith you show are truly appreciated. ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

June 30, 2020 at 11:57 AM

Ahhhh, another piece that lets the imagination wander creating a romantic scene in the minds eye Paul. Lovely! Blessings xxoo

Paul Callus

July 5, 2020 at 12:46 PM

Thank you Connie. I often like to leave some things hanging in mid-air, then letting the reader come to his/her own conclusions. ~ Warm regards // paul

Heidi Sands

June 30, 2020 at 9:48 AM

Beautifully written Paul :)

Paul Callus

July 5, 2020 at 11:52 AM

Glad you enjoyed it, Heidi...thank you...and please excuse the late reply! Hope you are feeling much better after your ordeal :) Warm regards // paul

Joseph May

June 29, 2020 at 1:57 PM

I love the word sillage, Nothing stops you when you are determined, Very nicely penned John, best wishes..

Paul Callus

July 3, 2020 at 4:31 PM

Thank you, Joseph. Best regards // paul

Tom Cunningham

June 29, 2020 at 8:58 AM

An emotional write Paul with a hint of romance. Good luck in the contest Tom

Paul Callus

July 3, 2020 at 4:29 PM

Thank you, Tom. Best regards // paul

Lawrence Sharp

June 28, 2020 at 7:13 AM

Brief and restrained, yet with great impact. Masterful wordcraft, Paul.

Paul Callus

June 28, 2020 at 10:27 AM

Your feedback is also impactful, Lawrence...thank you! Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit

June 28, 2020 at 6:46 AM

Tender emotions, lovingly, longingly displayed--

Paul Callus

June 28, 2020 at 10:25 AM

Thank you, Vijay. You sure hit on the right emotions! Regards // paul

Sand Blown

June 27, 2020 at 6:45 PM

well written....yes...favorite music.... makes/lets me see reality with a smile from a perspective of logic...see odds : ) that signify (what are called) the irrational and transcendental numbers that describe what is known as/called time.....we are a manifestation of time ….a rollercoaster....at night....no lights....only the effect...or what's called reality mind dream.....stan sand …..got carried away again (no!.....not dead yet : )

Paul Callus

June 28, 2020 at 5:25 AM

Thank you for such a pleasant visit, Stan. I can tell you like music (especially after having just read your poem Isolation Music). Best regards // paul