Music of the Night

Essence of night graces senses on balcony caressed in fairest moon. A serenade of longing scrolls over depths of love downstream to the Adriatic. All prudence portrayed in austere daylight, forbid love. Yet, darkness holds music flowing to paramour’s heart. Starry-eyed, an ethereal sonnet climbs rose trellis to touch poetic soul destined to dim as operatic dreams surrender to eternity.
Written 6/20/20 Contest – On Broadway Sponsor – Nette Onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Goldsmith Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 9:34 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful song, write and picture. Enjoy your win and day writing away................
Kauffman Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 1:09 PM
Ah, Romeo and Juliet emerge in the elegance of your words. Congratulations on your winning placement, Rhonda. This is lovely.
Mcconnell Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 4:17 PM
Lovely piece Rhonda with such fine imagery too. Have a blessed day, Gordon
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 8:26 PM
Thank you, Gordon!
Dietrich Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 2:44 PM
Just gorgeous!! (I tried to find the temple song but had no idea what that one was)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 10:08 PM
Hi Andrea, I checked it out. The Temple song is from Jesus Christ Superstar. I'll come see which one you chose. :)
Horne Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 2:21 PM
wow, such beauty in these lines
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 8:40 PM
Thanks, Jack, for the kind words! Blessings, Rhonda xx
One Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 10:26 AM
Oh wow... A shirt poem but some mane great lines... Great choice of words...
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 8:38 PM
Thank you, Silent! Blessings. Rhonda xx
Lamoureux Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 7:56 AM
You have a special way of weaving words. I expect this will do well in Nette’s contest. Hugs Rick.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 8:37 PM
Thanks, Rick! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Trifiatis Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 7:09 AM
Outstanding writing dearest, Rhoda. Hugs xxx
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 8:36 PM
Thank you, Demetrios! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 10:21 PM
I love this poem Rhonda. I have gone to see Phantom of the Opera twice here in Hawaii. I love the music. Your poem is outstanding! I hope Nette loves it too! I hope you enjoy Happy Father's Day tomorrow. I just posted a Hawaiian video you may enjoy at a blog at Poetry Soup. Check it out if you have the time. Aloha, Connie xxoo
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 8:35 PM
Thank you, Connie, for your kind comments! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Buehler Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 10:15 PM
Charm and romance abound in this magical verse, which brings to my mind, Romeo and Juliet.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 8:34 PM
Thanks, Evelyn! Yes. I was thinking of Romeo and Juliet when writing this one. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Parker Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 6:39 PM
This poem is really good, it touches the senses, very impressive write, dear poet
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 8:33 PM
Thank you, Frederic...so kind of you! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Pandit Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 2:29 PM
How enchanting is the essence of the night! Charming, delightful write, Rhonda.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 8:27 PM
Thank you for all your kind visits, Vijay ! Blessings, Rhonda xx
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