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This is second version. I have tried to make it more rhythmic. 

I hear the chiming symphony of chimes, Where wind's whispers weave enchanting rhymes, Emotions dance along the musical scales, joy and pain harmonize, their fusion prevails. The melodies cascade, a blissful cascade, As chimes and wind in harmony serenade, Emotions swell, riding musical waves, The rhythm of life, its secrets it unveils. Chimes sing their song, a celestial choir, Whispering winds set my soul on fire, Emotions intertwine, as music unveils, In the symphony's embrace, my spirit hails. When morning skies awaken with sunrise gleams, Colorful rays dance, painting vibrant dreams, In stillness, the chimes patiently reside, Awaiting the wind's whispers, hope shall guide. As mid-day unfolds, winds gain their might, Chimes' melodies soar, filling hearts with light, Love songs once sung to my beloved dear, Resound in chimes, eternal echoes I hear. Within night's embrace, darkness deep and wide, Silent chimes rest, no melodies to glide, Amidst twinkling stars, my lover I seek, Lonely senses play, longing and mystique.

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