Music Ketten

Music hangs fine lyrical paint,
paint that will never be unseen.
Unseen after it fills your heart, 
heart exploding in fast music.

Music catapults a mood swing,
swing until you can’t anymore.
Anymore cannot sway a beat,
beat delivered  by loud music.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Smith  Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 12:30 AM
I like how the chain-link technique—where the last word of one line becomes the first word of the next—mimics the continuous, unbreakable rhythm of a song. Additionally, bookending the first and last lines of each stanza with the word "Music" visually and rhythmically envelops the reader entirely within the sound. Nicely done.❤️
Udaeta Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 7:17 AM
Thank you! It’s a poetry form called a Ketten. I’m glad you enjoyed it. I love music! 🫶
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