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August 4, 2023

For Brian Strand's No. 1234 New Poem Only Contest

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(science) (has delivered) (many useful things) (to the mankind) (except for the) (weapons) (for war and) (mass destruction) (the worst and the most) (deadly amongst these is the) (atom bomb, the explosion) (of which produces) (mushroom-shaped cloud) (that billows upward) (with debris, smoke, water) (vapor along with the radioactive fission) (particles that get dispersed menacingly by the wind) (far away from the rising central column) (with the message of death) (we shouldn’t get) ||||||||| ||||||||| ||||||||| ||||||||| ||||||||| ~~~~~~~~~~~~”””~~~””””~~~””””~~~~”””””~~~~~~~~ ~~~“””~~~~”””””~~~~~~~”””””~~~~~~~~~”””””~~~~~~

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Date: 4/17/2025 6:49:00 PM
Subimal, interesting, frightening, an apt message! Let’s hope the leaders do not test this on mankind!!!! Congrats and hugs
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/18/2025 7:08:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. True, hope we don't see those days.
Date: 1/22/2024 6:01:00 PM
Dear Subimal, your poem is striking in both a visual and emotional way. So creative and impactful! And so true! Your last two lines are a grim yet grand finale to a powerful piece. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/24/2024 10:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan for your visit and for the encouraging comments.
Date: 1/22/2024 4:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. We don't want to see one of these in real life. Sara K
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/24/2024 10:39:00 PM
Thank you so much.
Date: 8/8/2023 7:22:00 AM
Creative work which is right along with societies concerns for earth and human's future life. Congratulations on this winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/24/2024 10:39:00 PM
Thank you, Sara.
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