Notes About The Poem

August 4, 2023

For Brian Strand's No. 1234 New Poem Only Contest

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Mushroom Cloud

(science) (has delivered) (many useful things) (to the mankind) (except for the) (weapons) (for war and) (mass destruction) (the worst and the most) (deadly amongst these is the) (atom bomb, the explosion) (of which produces) (mushroom-shaped cloud) (that billows upward) (with debris, smoke, water) (vapor along with the radioactive fission) (particles that get dispersed menacingly by the wind) (far away from the rising central column) (with the message of death) (we shouldn’t get) ||||||||| ||||||||| ||||||||| ||||||||| ||||||||| ~~~~~~~~~~~~”””~~~””””~~~””””~~~~”””””~~~~~~~~ ~~~“””~~~~”””””~~~~~~~”””””~~~~~~~~~”””””~~~~~~
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Rodrigues Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 6:49 PM
Subimal, interesting, frightening, an apt message! Let’s hope the leaders do not test this on mankind!!!! Congrats and hugs
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 18, 2025 at 7:08 PM
Thank you, Kim. True, hope we don't see those days.
Ashley Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 6:01 PM
Dear Subimal, your poem is striking in both a visual and emotional way. So creative and impactful! And so true! Your last two lines are a grim yet grand finale to a powerful piece. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 10:40 PM
Thank you so much, Susan for your visit and for the encouraging comments.
Kendrick Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 4:36 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. We don't want to see one of these in real life. Sara K
Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 10:39 PM
Thank you so much.
Kendrick Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 7:22 AM
Creative work which is right along with societies concerns for earth and human's future life. Congratulations on this winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara
Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 10:39 PM
Thank you, Sara.
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