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Mushroom

Moisture brings you to life, Among the decomposing leaves /Earth renews with seed or spore,\ ///dormant below our vision\\ //Awaiting new life, white or\\ /fiery orange, red, bell shaped or\ /Flat, pitchfork some are puff balls\ //Scattered by the winds to find their\\ Fertile soil Life giver Hope for //// Being Upon this Earth’s soil

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/9/2010 12:06:00 PM
wow - awesome Shape poem! very well done! thanks Doris for your kind congrats on my feature this week. much appreciated. love,shar
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Date: 3/1/2010 6:58:00 AM
Doris, what a great shape poem. I am just starting to play with shape in my poems. Well done. And thanks for commenting on my featuted poem today! Krista
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Date: 2/24/2010 3:42:00 PM
Luv this Shape on Mushroom... luv to eat them too...in just about everything.. u know us Italians...great job on the shape too Doris.. luv.. Linda-Marie.. description is impeccable ...
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Date: 2/24/2010 3:45:00 AM
Great design and shape. Great effort for these are not easy. Interesting topic when will everything get right for them to emerge again. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Mom
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Date: 2/24/2010 2:53:00 AM
Love down to earth poetry, regards and thanks Daniel
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Date: 2/23/2010 5:10:00 PM
loved the verse and the shapes cool too! Light & Love
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Date: 2/23/2010 7:48:00 AM
Very unique ,diffrent. Enjoyed reading your poem this morning..I love how you posted the poem..irma
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Date: 2/23/2010 7:20:00 AM
Well done. Unique.
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Date: 2/23/2010 7:10:00 AM
NOOO, I'm melting, melting by the sight of this shroom.... I hate mushrooms, but your shape is good...... Good form, keep up the good work....:JP]
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Date: 2/23/2010 6:53:00 AM
Clever one
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