Jai Bankson Poet Rhyme

Muse-Ic

You inspired me to scribble on paper with ink
                                     Telling me never to think
            About what to say so with that no heavy burden does my pen write
                  Clear of head clear of heart clear with bliss does my hand do part
                                No thought of hand or brain may see 
                             again my hand goes back to thee
                                A new muse have I sought
                         With each and every word I am taught 
                                A new lesson a skill if you must
                             Happy I listened for my hand did trust
                              I wrote for days into nights it seems
                           Not quite sure what was real or just dreams
                             
                                                                  Inspired by Muse and Music

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Pashang Salehi June 15, 2016 at 12:31 AM Your title brought me and your talent kept me Pashang Salehi June 17, 2016 at 1:00 AM You're always welcome......... Jai Bankson June 15, 2016 at 11:06 PM Many thanks!Look forward to reading your work,Take care,Jai

Laura Breidenthal April 5, 2016 at 3:46 AM This was quite free-flowing, Jai. Interesting write, and I am happy to see your muse is at work! Beautiful job. Always, Laura Jai Bankson April 5, 2016 at 10:04 AM I appreciate that very much! Jai

Timothy Hicks April 2, 2016 at 8:21 PM Another good poem (and fun wordplay in your title). Our muse really is like someone taking complete control over you ... rarely is it difficult, but nearly always free-flowing. You write well on this topic. Jai Bankson April 5, 2016 at 12:37 AM Appreciate that Timothy.When it is difficult I throw it away...Maybe good,maybe bad----It should --Must flow free!!!!!!

Suzanne Delaney April 1, 2016 at 2:56 AM Clever title; Love how you have played with the idea and the flow of it...into dreams. SuZ Jai Bankson April 5, 2016 at 12:38 AM Thank you very much Suzy Q!

Poet Destroyer A March 31, 2016 at 7:38 PM Ha, I like the double transaction. I wish I was hit with the both at the same time. My muse and music. However, Justin to be honest, I don't have a muse. Music is distracting. I tried it a few times and i was lost into the music instead. I envy you. Love LINDA Jai Bankson April 5, 2016 at 12:44 AM I haven't been envied in awhile..The trick is to not know the lyrics..HaHA,,Try SilverSun or Prestor Jon--I can't write without music screaming...To each their own..Seriously.check out Prestor Jon for me...You will love the drummer.