Speaks Volumes Poet Monoku

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Murmurs of My Heart

Irregular, pulsating beat of my lonely heart pining for you.


My blood pressure rising, heart beating faster, overwhelmed to see you.


Heart murmur erratic, thumps with joy as we are together again.

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Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris July 16, 2023 at 5:29 AM Nice romance... Congratulations on your win Good meaning of secret love ( Loving someone profoundly) Speaks Volumes July 16, 2023 at 5:41 AM Thank you Alfonso, I appreciate your fine comment. Best wishes from SV

JC Brul July 16, 2023 at 12:27 AM Great series of monokus. Congratulations and thank you for your participation. Blessings.^__^JCB Speaks Volumes July 16, 2023 at 12:33 AM Thank you so Much.

Christuraj Alex July 15, 2023 at 12:52 AM Separation and unison - beautifully illustrated. Great monoku. Congratulations! Speaks Volumes July 15, 2023 at 1:22 AM Thank you so much & congratulations on your well created Monoku gaining first place.

Jay Narain July 11, 2023 at 11:54 AM Not one, but three lines of Monoku. Nice. Speaks Volumes July 11, 2023 at 12:18 PM LOL It said "one or more", and I am known around town as a "blabber mouth" so I just kept going... Thanks so much for your comment Jay. Best wishes, SV