Murmurs of My Heart

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Irregular, pulsating beat of my lonely heart pining for you. My blood pressure rising, heart beating faster, overwhelmed to see you. Heart murmur erratic, thumps with joy as we are together again.

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Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 7/16/2023 5:29:00 AM

Nice romance... Congratulations on your win Good meaning of secret love ( Loving someone profoundly)

Speaks Volumes
Date: 7/16/2023 5:41:00 AM

Thank you Alfonso, I appreciate your fine comment. Best wishes from SV

Jcb Brul

Date: 7/16/2023 12:27:00 AM

Great series of monokus. Congratulations and thank you for your participation. Blessings.^__^JCB

Speaks Volumes
Date: 7/16/2023 12:33:00 AM

Thank you so Much.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/15/2023 12:52:00 AM

Separation and unison - beautifully illustrated. Great monoku. Congratulations!

Speaks Volumes
Date: 7/15/2023 1:22:00 AM

Thank you so much & congratulations on your well created Monoku gaining first place.

Jay Narain

Date: 7/11/2023 11:54:00 AM

Not one, but three lines of Monoku. Nice.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 7/11/2023 12:18:00 PM

LOL It said "one or more", and I am known around town as a "blabber mouth" so I just kept going... Thanks so much for your comment Jay. Best wishes, SV