Murmuring Moments

Water runs deep, bridges bend high, the mist-my endless sigh.
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Miller Avatar
July 17, 2023 at 3:09 AM
Wonderful monoku, congratulations
Scragg Avatar
July 17, 2023 at 6:41 AM
Thanks Terry :-D
Congratulations on your win ...Natasha
Scragg Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 10:47 AM
Thank you :-D
Brul Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 9:06 PM
Water runs deep, bridges bend high, the mist-my endless sigh. So lovely! Congratulations and thank you for your participation. Blessings.^___^ JCB
Scragg Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 10:46 AM
Thank you, a good challenge. Sometimes it's harder to write less so it was a good one to try. Thank you for my placement. :-D
Rodrigues Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 7:25 AM
Ooh…I can picture this artistic rendering! Congratulations, Natasha!
Scragg Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 10:48 AM
Thanks Kim. Was a good contest to try :-D
Alex Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 12:44 AM
Sigh of mist and mist of sigh. Great monoku. Congratulations!
Blown Avatar
July 13, 2023 at 2:32 PM
....nice title.....times humming be reality .....and ears/eyes be to a narrowness of frequencies our brain separates.....stan
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