Murmuring Moments

Water runs deep, bridges bend high, the mist-my endless sigh.

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Date: 7/17/2023 3:09:00 AM

Wonderful monoku, congratulations

Natasha L Scragg
Date: 7/17/2023 6:41:00 AM

Thanks Terry :-D

Date: 7/16/2023 5:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win ...Natasha

Natasha L Scragg
Date: 7/16/2023 10:47:00 AM

Thank you :-D

Date: 7/15/2023 9:06:00 PM

Water runs deep, bridges bend high, the mist-my endless sigh. So lovely! Congratulations and thank you for your participation. Blessings.^___^ JCB

Natasha L Scragg
Date: 7/16/2023 10:46:00 AM

Thank you, a good challenge. Sometimes it's harder to write less so it was a good one to try. Thank you for my placement. :-D

Date: 7/15/2023 7:25:00 AM

Ooh…I can picture this artistic rendering! Congratulations, Natasha!

Natasha L Scragg
Date: 7/16/2023 10:48:00 AM

Thanks Kim. Was a good contest to try :-D

Date: 7/15/2023 12:44:00 AM

Sigh of mist and mist of sigh. Great monoku. Congratulations!

Date: 7/13/2023 2:32:00 PM

....nice title.....times humming be reality .....and ears/eyes be to a narrowness of frequencies our brain separates.....stan