Murder

We've lost it all,
our love is gone.
You said one day it couldn't be replaced,
you said we'd forever be
and now i've caused all this disgrace
I'm cursed with nothing, but that's the fee-
for stealing the eyes of a virgin heart, ripping my insides apart,
i'm a villain to you.
I'm cursed, 
blessed that you consider hearing me out
after this roller coaster flew off the tracks
It's ironic how,
The moment I need you,
your a million miles away
subliminally screwing with my head, throwing knives at my vulnerability
as I fall to the ground silently with a splatter.
And the knives rip my heart as it caress the floor,
and all I could tell you was that 
I still loved you,
but you turned your back and ran away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Gordon Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 7:59 AM
did you write the one destroying angel? trying to find that one too...i dont think she is a destroying angel, i think those two posts were sarcasm over pornography on another site..sarcasm only...unsure if you wrote that poem or not
Gordon Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 7:51 AM
sounds very dramatic...in my faith sometimes the cursing might be something we did to others, maybe double check anything you have done let us say in the last two years? the universe gives us back what we do to God and man..my view...good post, I mean I am really enjoying this poem...made me smile so well written and all
Nutter Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 2:50 AM
Heart rendering poem, a love not reurned is the most painful
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