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Murder

Thump, thump Shivas drum, Good and bad through body run, Footprint stomp on primal ash, Crazy head will kill for cash. Body mind and soul will flow, Back to ether it must go, Crazy head, hand with a gun; Disturbs our cosmic equilibrium. Crazy head who wants much more, Ignorant of times before, Shivas drum has just begun, To start the world, again, re-run!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/19/2010 2:48:00 PM
wow i really liked this poem david, body mind and soul will flo i like that
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Date: 1/3/2010 12:04:00 PM
Very real and intriguing piece! I can't believe I haven't read your poetry before this, but I plan to make up for lost time and check out the rest of your talented pieces! Great job! keep up the good work and thank you for sharing!
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Date: 1/2/2010 1:33:00 AM
Nice flow. Keep writing.
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Date: 1/1/2010 11:40:00 PM
Made me think of images like REDRUM! Good one! andrea
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