Sunita U.D Palawon Poet Verse

Mum Is God

God  
                                              Is  Mum;
                                              Mum  is 
                                              Beloved.
                                         Grand   ways   in, 
                                          Has she  hidden  
                                        Sorrow   and   tears. 
                                        We  are  ever   safe  ... 
                                       Yet   rightly  guiding,
                                         Always   shielding;
                                       "Mum"  plays   often,
                                           Roles of saint
                                         With   long   life  
                                            Blessed  are 
                                               We, kids, 
                                                 God 


24/07/16
Contest: Backwards Poem- Laura Loo
Placed 3
48 syllables - 1223344554433221

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Beautiful Scars August 16, 2016 at 11:36 AM Sunita, very cute...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo Sunita U.D Palawon August 16, 2016 at 11:43 AM Thanks Laura for appreciating. it was a pleasure struggling with this form of yours!:D and wonderful reading all the poem on the win list. Love Sunita

Richard Lamoureux July 24, 2016 at 11:57 PM It works well forwards and backwards. Sunita U.D Palawon July 25, 2016 at 9:01 AM I'm glad you like it and see the flow. Thanks Sunita

Andrea Dietrich July 24, 2016 at 12:59 PM you are brilliant to think of this. Maybe I should write of DOGS!! (reversing that word and making it plural) Gotta think of SOMETHING. Sunita U.D Palawon July 24, 2016 at 10:28 PM That's a great idea...I'm sure you will come up with s'thg fantastic. GL and thanks for the comment, Love Sunita