Muddy Haiku

mud season
                            tracks its feet
                            on the way in   and out
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Roper Avatar
April 18, 2019 at 10:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in Laura's contest. Have a great Easter. Hugs Eve ~`*
Knowlton Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 4:49 AM
Thank you Eve. I appreciate your response.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 10:27 PM
Congratulations on your win. I love the way you wrote this Charlie. : )
Knowlton Avatar
April 18, 2019 at 4:34 AM
Thank you Connie.
Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 8:45 PM
Spring in all its glory! Good one, Charlie.
Knowlton Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 10:14 PM
Thank you Line…Really messy down here.
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 6:25 PM
I love this, Charlie (delete the apostrophe in it's)
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 10:26 PM
Andrea is an English teacher and she knows. I ask for her help sometimes. : )
Knowlton Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 7:45 PM
Hi Andrea and thanks for your response. Are you sure about the apostrophe?…It`s possessive. I will delete it though.
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