Muddied Waters

Soul a cryin shame
Deep blue sky can’t change a thang 
Oh the blues baby
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 7:29 PM
This has nice twang I've never read in a haiku before, unique and cool :) I dig it
Chircop Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 4:35 PM
Excellent!
Meade Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 4:21 PM
Nicely done . . . loved that last line!! Great play on the blues .. . all the best.
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