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Muddied Waters

Soul a cryin shame Deep blue sky can’t change a thang Oh the blues baby

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/13/2014 7:29:00 PM
This has nice twang I've never read in a haiku before, unique and cool :) I dig it
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Date: 11/13/2014 4:35:00 PM
Excellent!
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Date: 11/13/2014 4:21:00 PM
Nicely done . . . loved that last line!! Great play on the blues .. . all the best.
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