Mud Splatters - Haiku

giant rain unleashed cracked thirsty earth sipping drops mud splatters
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 4:19 PM
Lots of good strong consonants in this one for sound of heavy rain and mud! Nicely done.
Brown Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 8:51 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Teresita. Wishing you a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Wilson Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 4:28 AM
Feel i can see this with this vivd description..love,Deb
Laan Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 3:56 AM
wow, this has a lot of energy in it:))
Nutter Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 3:02 AM
Excellent Haiku, one feels the pelting rain.....
Mehta Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 2:45 AM
Nice pen picture of the heavy rain, Teresita
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