Mud Bath (Fibonacci No. 2)

Feet
stick
on soil
just like knives
screaming homicide
to a burdened inspector man;
the earth is murdering my ankles, and I like it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 8, 2009 at 5:53 AM
This is incredible..I love the imagery...feet stick on soil just like knives....the ending is done well..good work.
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