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after we talk i enjoy my walk home settles my flurry of thoughts stirred emotions deep down Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~CLOUDS MEANDER~ 2020 AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on February 18, 2018 for CONTEST NO.400 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

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Date: 2/19/2018 3:17:00 PM
It's fun to imagine the scene here, and to re-write the whole story; I am feeling this had to do with first love.
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Date: 2/19/2018 7:20:00 PM
It is so much fun when the poem can be interpreted in different ways. The reader ends up doing some of the work ! LOL Thank you so much for your delightful visit and comment, Caren.
Date: 2/19/2018 7:56:00 AM
I love this too as it is so relatable to me…Good luck in the contest Line! PS My space…the final frontier lol!~Che :)
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Date: 2/19/2018 10:38:00 AM
Thank you, Cheryl. Hats off to your final frontier!
Date: 2/18/2018 9:51:00 PM
Hey this is a cute write, regardless. Good luck!
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Date: 2/18/2018 11:54:00 PM
Thanks for your visit, Moon.
Date: 2/18/2018 9:18:00 PM
I like it. Much said in few words, captured perfectly. xomo
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Date: 2/18/2018 12:59:00 PM
this says so much in so few lines - love it
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Date: 2/18/2018 3:59:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and comment, Jack. Much appreciated.

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