Much Needed Space

after we talk i enjoy my walk home
settles my flurry of thoughts
stirred emotions deep down



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~CLOUDS MEANDER~ 2020

AP: Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 3:17 PM
It's fun to imagine the scene here, and to re-write the whole story; I am feeling this had to do with first love.
Gauthier Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 7:20 PM
It is so much fun when the poem can be interpreted in different ways. The reader ends up doing some of the work ! LOL Thank you so much for your delightful visit and comment, Caren.
Hoffman Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 7:56 AM
I love this too as it is so relatable to me…Good luck in the contest Line! PS My space…the final frontier lol!~Che :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 10:38 AM
Thank you, Cheryl. Hats off to your final frontier!
Flower Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 9:51 PM
Hey this is a cute write, regardless. Good luck!
Gauthier Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 11:54 PM
Thanks for your visit, Moon.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 9:18 PM
I like it. Much said in few words, captured perfectly. xomo
Horne Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 12:59 PM
this says so much in so few lines - love it
Gauthier Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 3:59 PM
Thank you for your visit and comment, Jack. Much appreciated.
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