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since my baby been away. i miss her more and more each day. every night i try to pray. bring my baby home to stay. is there some way i can find her. next time i'll be much more kinder. i wish wish wish with all my might that i could be right besider. i would holder so much tighter make her world much more brighter capture a star if i could and put it on your finger if you would promise to love you with love that adores this is only the begginning there's much much more

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Date: 8/10/2010 6:24:00 AM
tears flow when love goes,i've only had a few but i still miss them
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Date: 8/9/2010 11:03:00 PM
Sometimes giving all your love is not enough if the feelings are not returned. YOU are such a romantic John you could write her poems. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 8/3/2010 8:13:00 PM
John, I understand these feelings.....I wish not to burden you with my story, (filled with dread and delight!) but I much enjoyed this plaintive poem, and thanks for your flattering comments, jimbo
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Date: 8/3/2010 6:29:00 PM
You have such a loving heart, John. A beautiful poem! And thanks for correcting "living" to "loving" on my poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/3/2010 5:02:00 PM
Very poetic heartfelt write John ! The star on the finger I think will do it Sir ! *smiles* james
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Date: 8/3/2010 1:33:00 PM
Very nice rhyme John and very pretty words too.. with luv.. so enjoyed this very creative piece..today..
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Date: 8/3/2010 1:17:00 PM
Reads like you have some very great lovin' feelin' for some lucky young lady...With great love like that there is the perfect one for you..Sara
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