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Mt Fuji

Mt. Fuji’s crest jeweled by white cloudy frills; lava boils beneath Haiku syllable count 5/7/5

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Date: 7/28/2014 11:13:00 PM
Excellent use of this form! Peace & Blesings Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/10/2014 1:28:00 AM
Now THIS is a SUPERB haiku... CONGRATS on THE write. Rated 7 and a FAV. Dutch Greetings Elly
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Ivy Van Zeeland
Date: 6/10/2014 3:20:00 AM
It shows... it shows... was a SUPERB experiences described in a SUPERB haiku!
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/10/2014 2:02:00 AM
Thank you Elly. If in Japan, one cannot help but visit this attraction. I had an occasion to climb Mt. Fuji. The view from the top is fabulous, esp. the sunset and the sun rise. Mohan
Date: 6/1/2014 9:29:00 AM
Well done - enjoyed your version - great imagery!
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/1/2014 9:41:00 AM
Thanx Pandita
Date: 5/31/2014 11:43:00 PM
oh my goodness. to the side of this page is an ad to take Mt. Fuji tours. hahaha
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/1/2014 9:46:00 AM
Andrea, It indeed is a wonderful experience to see Mt. Fuji from close and climb on it. Climb on it is a bit of adventure. Been there for a number of times and have scores of lovely snaps too. There is a legend there that says that if you go to Mt. Fuji once, it calls you to visit again. Also, Japanese revere the mountain and call it with respect as 'Fuji san'. Mohan
Date: 5/31/2014 11:42:00 PM
A wonder this MT. must be!!!
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