Ms Bunny

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A poem from the book I wrote for my grandson, Oliver. This features Ms Bunny, a bunny.

Funny old Ms. Bunny has a sunny disposition, But how can she be happy in a circular position? She can’t be very comfy with a big hole in her tum. Perhaps when she was made, they weren’t sure where to place her bum.

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Martin Braun

Date: 7/29/2023 12:27:00 PM

Oh, my! I read the poem, without seeing the photo. I'm glad I now see the photo. I was going to suggest peanut butter to fill her hole... but then... you would begin to see her bum. LOL Fun poem... Thank you.

John Wilmore
Date: 7/29/2023 2:55:00 PM

Martin, haha, and thank you for reading!

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 3/29/2022 10:27:00 AM

This poem has a wonderful charm to it, and a great rhyme scheme, too. I think it's really neat, and that both kids and adults would enjoy it.

John Wilmore
Date: 3/29/2022 4:28:00 PM

Thank you Carol. I love to write silly poems and my grandchildren have provided inspiration.