"mr.Valentines Day"09'

hinged on wooden,  loved starved, designs  
are my  "Sailor's Valentines" 
floating a drift with sentimental love's gifts
just to wait for love's Sweet souvenirs
to float a love shells this way...
 
to be redeem by love, given with faith 
this is but, one of many  "Coupon of love" 
to be opened at love's heavenly gates

for on this "Black Day" i do wait 
for this romantic Jajangmyeon 
spread no longer between 
two broken plates 

aka:lyricvixen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 11, 2009 at 7:54 PM
Very interesting take on this Valentines day poem - very original - God Bless, MJ
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