Mrs Preddy

Mrs Preddy wasn't ready
a fragile woman, at best unsteady
no little ones to call her own
just her and Mr P alone
but a heart so big; it had to share
she needed some to give her care
she gave her all to pass the faith
but in the end, she lost her ways
twelve preteens in her Sunday School
pushed her down the rabbit hole
she tried to teach them in her home
for at the church, her mind did roam
to places, far and wide and vast
from the future to the distant past
she made them milk and cookies too
she helped their minds and souls accrue
but on the road to Bethlehem,
old voices did again proclaim
she shut the doors; the curtains tight
the house was locked from day til night
her flock was taken back to school
for children follow adult's rules
but in those cold and dingy rooms
the stories took on doom and gloom
no joy when Jesus raised the dead
just reverence and maybe dread
something to fear instead of love
not from the heart, just from above
her congregation soon thinned out
to throw and kick the ball about
while Mrs P sat all alone
and God waits still, upon his throne

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/24/2015 6:25:00 PM
Your poem falls within the category of sorrowful, fanciful and imaginative; armed with an energy of its own that propels it into our sphere of reality. Emile.
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David Brown
Date: 6/27/2015 6:30:00 PM
Thank you Emile, that is very kind.
Date: 6/23/2015 10:50:00 AM
A masterful narrative in rhyme, David. I am curious about her sad story. Sorry, I am from a country across the globe. Why would the kids push her down the rabbit hole? I like how you structured the poem though.
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David Brown
Date: 6/23/2015 11:20:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words Kim. Mrs Preddy was a real person; I believe she had what we would now call agoraphobia. The children (I was one) didn't literally push her down the hole, I suppose they were the proverbial straw.
Date: 6/22/2015 11:42:00 PM
Excellent write I can feel the sadness of mrs P........A.M.
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David Brown
Date: 6/23/2015 11:21:00 AM
Thank you Afolabi, much appreciated
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