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Mr Wonderful

A broken promise, demoralized man who is incapable of being true, A thoughtless coward, oblivious clown, this is what I think of you, A woeful chicken, a runaway guy is how you're now portrayed, A selfish critter, a prideful morsel is the reputation you have made, When flesh spoils in a slaughter house the smell of you comes to mind, For your manipulation has made you completely colorblind, In your mothers soil you were the bad seed, As you grew up we realized you were just a weed, A fragmentation, with no revelation is who you really are, A scab that stopped healing, the beggar who keeps on stealing, now just another scar, A predicable cycle, a sick little mess, a hidden agenda that isn’t well dressed, A miserable liar, disposable fool, too bad you weren’t like an infertile mule, Just like a wolf, you would consume your own, For apparently humanity was something you were never shown, Just like wild animals that abandon their first litter, You fit right in, you unoriginal quitter. By: Sabina Nicole Written:9/29/11 Contest:Angry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/25/2014 8:09:00 PM
You were right, I did like it:)
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Date: 10/3/2011 9:29:00 AM
wow this is mega angry...i sure would n't wanna be your enemy , Sabina....congratulations and .....best wishes
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Date: 10/3/2011 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Show Me Your Anger" contest Sabina. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2011 4:56:00 AM
Huge congratulations on your first place win with this emotional piece, an honour to share first place with you
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Date: 10/3/2011 12:23:00 AM
Now that is what I call angry. well done and congratulations on your well deserved win. Lee
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Date: 10/2/2011 8:52:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your FIRST PLACE WIN!!!!! awesome write!!!!!!!!====Lori
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Date: 10/2/2011 6:52:00 PM
Awesome piece,full of emotions and anger.Congratulations on your well deserved win,Sabina.keep flying high....
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Date: 10/2/2011 6:45:00 PM
Congrats Sabina on first place win with this emotional expression luv..
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Date: 9/29/2011 10:13:00 PM
Have we met? You seem to know me, but I can't picture you. Love the poem.
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