Mr Wonderful

A broken promise, demoralized man who is incapable of being true, 	
A thoughtless coward, oblivious clown, this is what I think of you,

A woeful chicken, a runaway guy is how you're now portrayed,
A selfish critter, a prideful morsel is the reputation you have made,

When flesh spoils in a slaughter house the smell of you comes to mind,
For your manipulation has made you completely colorblind,

In your mothers soil you were the bad seed,
As you grew up we realized you were just a weed,

A fragmentation, with no revelation is who you really are,
A scab that stopped healing, the beggar who keeps on stealing, now just another scar,

A predicable cycle, a sick little mess, a hidden agenda that isn’t well dressed,
A miserable liar, disposable fool, too bad you weren’t like an infertile mule,

Just like a wolf, you would consume your own,
For apparently humanity was something you were never shown,

Just like wild animals that abandon their first litter,
You fit right in, you unoriginal quitter.

By: Sabina Nicole
Written:9/29/11
Contest:Angry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Conner Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 8:09 PM
You were right, I did like it:)
Beck Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 9:29 AM
wow this is mega angry...i sure would n't wanna be your enemy , Sabina....congratulations and .....best wishes
Brown Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 7:29 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Show Me Your Anger" contest Sabina. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 4:56 AM
Huge congratulations on your first place win with this emotional piece, an honour to share first place with you
Ramage Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 12:23 AM
Now that is what I call angry. well done and congratulations on your well deserved win. Lee
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 8:52 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your FIRST PLACE WIN!!!!! awesome write!!!!!!!!====Lori
Arowolo Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 6:52 PM
Awesome piece,full of emotions and anger.Congratulations on your well deserved win,Sabina.keep flying high....
Sweetheart Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 6:45 PM
Congrats Sabina on first place win with this emotional expression luv..
Smith Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 10:13 PM
Have we met? You seem to know me, but I can't picture you. Love the poem.
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