Mr. Moon and I

You an I are one, alone, not star stands by your side;
Although, many may admire you, you sit in solitude in the sky.

I understand your plight, many associates, yet no companions;
They pop up once or twice, but mostly they leave you, up there abandoned.

Yet you continue to shine bright, never letting the cycle dwindle your shine;
Oh how you an I resemble, never letting the isolation dwell to deep within your mind.

It is nature's will you see, some gain strength by being alone;
But I ask you my dear friend, have you ever wanted a star to call your own.

That one star you can count on, a star as beautiful and gentle as could be;
A vision of heavens loveliness, a star that allowed you to be who you wanted to be.

Is this a dream you and I share? Has the idea ever made you stop and think?
Or do you enjoy the solitude of the sky? Is that something which makes you feel distinct.

You know I respect all that you do, All alone shining bright Mr. Moon;
Only thing that we do not have in common is, for you the stars will be out soon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/7/2009 12:14:00 PM
this is so very touching Leo loved reading this piece from start to finish great job
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