Mr Moon

Shining my night sky,
Over the darkest hours of my life.
Longed for your love,
On a wish of a bit of bright light.
Moon shine on me.
Out in of nowhere it enlightened me,
Nothing compares its beauty.

Right there I stare,
At its flickering beauty
Everything is like a fantasy.

Can I have you?
A question I wanted to ask.
Never had I ever expected, you
Jumped up and shouted
Atlast!

Says your name in a poem,
And I will spell it right.
Because my love for you is more than just right.
Everything now is like a dream,
Nothing can stop me from smiling.
Even trolls and ogres are like fairies
Coz for me nothing is ugly.
I love you and that’s what I feel,
On this day and until eternity.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 11:04 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 21, 2016 at 10:12 PM
amour krezha cordova, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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January 15, 2016 at 8:55 PM
Amour, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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May 14, 2012 at 11:14 AM
Romantic poem in the moonlight Amour, well done. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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