Mr. Loving Iii

Mr. Loving, one two three
You have really kept me busy
But thank goodness I can repay
I found the 's' that went astray
I checked prescious and did agree
Multplications is where it should be
Since the nice things about my poems you did say
I'll just say thanks again
And sent that rascal 's' on his way
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Makama Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 3:51 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
Rich Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 3:15 PM
Hello really enjoyed this poetry today and also will read more... Hope you will enjoy my poem/ story: Criminal-- part2 have a great day
Loving Iii Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 1:49 PM
LOLOLOL
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