Mr Lonely

What will you do all by yourself?
No one's left to call your name.
You've hidden your soul up on a shelf.
Your foolish pride is what's to blame.

Mr. Lonely you've got me down so low.
Mr. Lonely I'm pleading let me go.
Mr. Lonely you worry my heart so.

I tried to make life better for you
when other lovers had let you down.
Yet you had not a heart so true;
shattered my world-stomped me down.

Mr. Lonely you've got me down so low.
Mr. Lonely I'm pleading let me go.
Mr. Lonely you worry my heart so.

So now I need to walk away.
If I don't leave I'll lose my mind
It's impossible for me to stay.
I'm begging darling please be kind.


written by Deb Wilson
this poem was inspired by "LAYLA"  by Eric Clapton
for Giorgio V's contest "A song inspires a poem"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A  Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 6:08 PM
awesomely done SKAT
Kendrick Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 9:14 AM
I noticed your name on the winners' list..Great winning lyrical work..Congrats...Sara
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January 8, 2014 at 11:23 PM
What a lovely poem and a fine win. Congrats on the win,Deb
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