Mr Hai-ku
In a summer dream,
I have fallen from on high...
with a solemn sigh!
A baby new born,
naked in a strange world...
hair slightly curled!
Now learning so fast,
growing big and standing tall...
one day heeds the call!
Trained body and mind,
to know he can stand the test..
and will be the best!
Loved ones will miss him,
they'll be waving with a sigh...
hoping not to cry!
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