Mr, Feather and the Rock

Mr.   Feather and the Rock

	Im just floating down	
Farther and longer
Like Mr. Feather that is so free in air

	  Im going to be flat on my back
	  I see Mr. Feather get blown the other way

What the Hell?  No way
Does the blowing wind send us to the path
We must take?

	  My wind flattened me out
	  Im ready for giving up my life

Mr. Feather flies back by again
Maybe he is right and Im gonna pick myself up
And let this journey begin.

	  Am I a Feather or a Rock?  Does a rock have a bottom?
	  Is it where bad rocks go when they die?  Or does the wind have me
	                               Fooled again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 24, 2015 at 5:53 PM
Hi William, great format. LOL, does a rock have a bottom? I hope it's the wind. :) I'd hate to think rocks actually die. Awesome write. SKAT
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