Mr Electric Blue Spider

Who is he? They were asking in Montana, Bandicoot. 
It was Mr. Electric Blue spider, and he was a beaut.
He kept creeping along, pretending he did not understand.
Besides, he was on his way to hear a Mariachi Band.

Seriously, do you know him? My neighbor asked me.
I thought she was too curious, we call her Widow Zee.
He’s an out-of-towner, a stranger, I said in my best voice.
I hear that he is a widow man, his deceased wife was Joyce.
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Hankins Avatar
December 2, 2022 at 7:43 PM
Caren, I'm always delighted by the way you come up with names to rhyme. It's rather unique to you. Can you rhyme Hankins with anything? I know you could put Milton up at the Hilton, but Hankins???
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December 3, 2022 at 6:53 PM
Shankins, spankins, quankins, lankins, dankins, mankins, jankins, crankins, dwankins, slankins, smankins, clankins, wankins, zankins, vankins, other than this - no.
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