Mr Down You Ve Got a Vicious Daughter

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Parody on Herman's Hermits "Mrs.Brown You've Got a Lovely Daughter" 1965

Mr. Down, you’ve got a vicious daughter.
Girls this mean lay my emotions bare.
I am so glad she doesn’t like me now.
She is clever enough, but me she doesn’t mind.

She’s a snot and acts haughty, your daughter.
Please tell her I barely know her name.
Here’s the game, I think she’s a big cow.
She is clever enough, but me she doesn’t mind.

Running around
She has a stench, a smell
Her voice as shout
It is ugly mean and loud

If she finds that I’ve been round to see you (round to see you)
Tell her that to her I pay no mind (pay no mind, ooh).
Don’t let on, never let her think she’s smart.
I would run away, but to me she does not mind.

Mr. Down, you’ve got a vicious daughter (vicious daughter)
Mr. Down, you’ve got a vicious daughter (vicious daughter)
Mr. Down, you’ve got a vicious daughter (vicious daughter)
Mr. Down, you’ve got a vicious daughter (vicious daughter)


Written 10-18-21
Contest: Change the Record
Sponsor: Natasha L Scragg
Original Song: Herman's Hermits "Mrs. Brown You've Got a Lovely Daughter"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 10/16/2021 9:13:00 PM
Pretty Good, Caren! ~ I'm Henry the 8th, I am (and you're Queen Victoria too) lol.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/17/2021 3:58:00 AM
I am Henry the 8th too! So step aside Gershon.
Date: 10/16/2021 8:51:00 PM
Good one. The last time I saw Herman's Hermits, there was only one of them left. I loved their songs!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/17/2021 3:58:00 AM
I do too!
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