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Mr Down You Ve Got a Vicious Daughter

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Parody on Herman's Hermits "Mrs.Brown You've Got a Lovely Daughter" 1965

Mr. Down, you’ve got a vicious daughter. Girls this mean lay my emotions bare. I am so glad she doesn’t like me now. She is clever enough, but me she doesn’t mind. She’s a snot and acts haughty, your daughter. Please tell her I barely know her name. Here’s the game, I think she’s a big cow. She is clever enough, but me she doesn’t mind. Running around She has a stench, a smell Her voice as shout It is ugly mean and loud If she finds that I’ve been round to see you (round to see you) Tell her that to her I pay no mind (pay no mind, ooh). Don’t let on, never let her think she’s smart. I would run away, but to me she does not mind. Mr. Down, you’ve got a vicious daughter (vicious daughter) Mr. Down, you’ve got a vicious daughter (vicious daughter) Mr. Down, you’ve got a vicious daughter (vicious daughter) Mr. Down, you’ve got a vicious daughter (vicious daughter) Written 10-18-21 Contest: Change the Record Sponsor: Natasha L Scragg Original Song: Herman's Hermits "Mrs. Brown You've Got a Lovely Daughter"

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Date: 10/16/2021 9:13:00 PM
Pretty Good, Caren! ~ I'm Henry the 8th, I am (and you're Queen Victoria too) lol.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/17/2021 3:58:00 AM
I am Henry the 8th too! So step aside Gershon.
Date: 10/16/2021 8:51:00 PM
Good one. The last time I saw Herman's Hermits, there was only one of them left. I loved their songs!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/17/2021 3:58:00 AM
I do too!

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