Mr. Cloud

Daddy, what is that?
Why’s he floating all alone?
Goodbye Mr. Cloud.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Edmonds Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 10:13 AM
Mr. Cloud, nice title, your attention is vast and captures it all, amazing material.
Goombi Avatar
March 28, 2009 at 11:48 PM
I've heard such questions.
Neal Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 10:07 PM
Awe....sweet write, childish questions. Love Elizabeth
Neal Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 3:15 AM
Nice title. I can see a child asking this. Strong images you paint in your work. DN
Martin Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 2:58 AM
Nice one again, this one showcases a child so well. Great observing eye you have. Tyler
Haniff Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 1:20 PM
this is sooo sweet and innocent.....it made me smile~...Maryam*
Winter Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 5:55 AM
Ahh, to be a child again. Precious the way their innocent, imaginative minds work. Love, Shar
Lopez Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 9:32 PM
THE QUESTIONS OF BABES THEY ARE SO INNOCENT .... GREAT JOB RAUL
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