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Mr. Cloud

Daddy, what is that? Why’s he floating all alone? Goodbye Mr. Cloud.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/29/2009 10:13:00 AM
Mr. Cloud, nice title, your attention is vast and captures it all, amazing material.
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Date: 3/28/2009 11:48:00 PM
I've heard such questions.
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Date: 3/27/2009 10:07:00 PM
Awe....sweet write, childish questions. Love Elizabeth
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Date: 3/27/2009 3:15:00 AM
Nice title. I can see a child asking this. Strong images you paint in your work. DN
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Date: 3/27/2009 2:58:00 AM
Nice one again, this one showcases a child so well. Great observing eye you have. Tyler
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Date: 3/26/2009 1:20:00 PM
this is sooo sweet and innocent.....it made me smile~...Maryam*
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Date: 3/26/2009 5:55:00 AM
Ahh, to be a child again. Precious the way their innocent, imaginative minds work. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/25/2009 9:32:00 PM
THE QUESTIONS OF BABES THEY ARE SO INNOCENT .... GREAT JOB RAUL
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