Mr and Mrs

how wonderful our sences are
a gift for me and you
with attractions from both near and far
our bodies find their use
my hands they'd reach around your waist
so i can hold you in my arms
and as we wrestle cheek to cheek
i'd feel the comfort of your charms
my eye's would find the other eye's
and tell them things unsaid
and in closing asking for a kiss
for tongues that must be feed
i'd sence the sweet perfume 
you put on around your face
because this night is special
for Love we enter this place
in this night we give ourselves
where two become one
in a sence a spiritual meeting
for us a sacred bond
oaths without words
and promises to be forgotten
the gift we give our sences
renamed Mr. and Mrs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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O'Leary Avatar
September 7, 2012 at 6:52 PM
A very nice, very romantic poem! Terry
Wesley Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 12:02 PM
Has a feeling of gentle tenderness that enfolds the reader in the subtleties of romance. Sweet endingh TS; you have so much to give in your poetry! Luv, Lizzie
Situation Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 3:49 PM
always leave them wanting more
Horsman Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 8:47 AM
wonderful poem, enjoyed, harry
K Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 2:10 PM
Adorable!! Wonderfully written sir!
Write A Lot? Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 7:57 PM
Nice one
Cooper Avatar
March 25, 2012 at 11:01 AM
I just stopped by to recomment. lovely words from the heart. thank you for your lovely comments on my work.
Carrillo Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 4:19 PM
Great poem. Love between two people is always beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Lu Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 8:39 AM
I fear my perception may be off a little as to comment but, I always enjoy the read. sweet sentiments found here.~ And thank you for you very much appreciared comment on my butterfly write. a writer inspired it, was quite the hoot on another site, "must have been quite the inspiration was the web he tore down in public. Dark poets are fun, and they appreciate me there, I feel cause in it, that is the true reason for my writing, why fuss and fight and get stressed, move on.... where I may make a posive impact and not negative, still I will return to comment. time is limited, too many oars in the water ya know? God bless you and keep you and your family safe at His omnpotent hand. Cindy
Kendrick Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 5:36 AM
Interesting work that I have just read..I am not sure of the interpertation...On my work about the gun show and the buzzards dining in the open field..Around here every so often dealers and collectors show what they have at a show in a place like Perry Fair Grounds or The Coleisum in Macon..The form that I used to write the work is called a Halibun..It is a text or picture plus a Haiku..Haiku was the only thing that any way closely matched what it is actually called..I did not kill anyone..Sara
Kendrick Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 5:37 AM
Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
Chircop Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 6:38 AM
Very beautiful poem about giving each other through love--lovely..Charma
Lefanue Avatar
March 4, 2012 at 2:58 AM
Thanks for your comment, although I am not sure I follow you. Cheers, Maureen
Wesley Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 5:37 PM
Such a tender romantic verse to dwell on; you sound like a sensitive guy who appreciates those special moments we all need and love.
Andresen Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 1:44 PM
Beautiful written, like it alot "Mr. and Mrs."- oxox love Anne-Lise
Cooper Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 10:20 AM
lovely.
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