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Mr Alcohol

My name is Mr. Alcohol I'm really not your friend My goal is to take you down, down to your end. My name is Mr. Alcohol I like to mes with your head Like wake up drink Life mess up drink Hurting drink Depressed drink and my list goes on and on. My name is Mr. Alcohol Ha ha yes I'm a no good friend, if your not Careful, I will take you out in the end.

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James Ranahan

Date: 1/19/2015 7:56:00 PM

"I'm really not your friend".... Oh yea, but seductive as heck. It makes you think it's your friend, but then it lies, it steals, it cheats. I get the contempt you have in your tone. I'll have a diet coke. Jim

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/19/2015 7:03:00 PM

Very powerful pen here Kim! And yes alcohol is a terrible and very sad disease and addiction that can destroy and even kill in the end. A 7 from me! Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxxxx D. ^O^