Moving Towars the Perfection

We are moving
towards the perfection
day by day

Caused to be perfected
for reason of that
ray by ray

Let, sight fall
in to the primitive societies
no home, no dress at all

Chewed and swallowed 
raw flesh of animals 
without cooked

In court of kings
animals tried like man
punished for deeds

Now, we fly to Planets
with Rockets
see the World in home

A day will come
man will fly 
with artificial wings

because we are moving
towards the perfection
in thoughts in the World.
day by day and ray by ray.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 7/14/2013 12:19:00 AM
Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA
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Date: 7/14/2013 8:55:00 AM
Many thanks for featuring my write. Good night toyou too. Loved always, bl
Date: 7/7/2013 9:23:00 PM
"we are moving towards the perfection" ~ couldn't agree more...congratz for being featured this week, BL.. :))
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/8/2013 8:51:00 AM
Many many thanks to the Poetry Soup for featuring this poem and thanks to you too for wishing me congratulation. Loved always, bl
Date: 6/24/2011 7:20:00 PM
You reach that goal with style.
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Bl Devnath
Date: 6/25/2011 12:33:00 AM
I feel you are ahead than me, Your comment inspires me to reach that goal. Thanking You for commenting with rich words. bl
Date: 6/24/2011 9:15:00 AM
Yes, I agree... a man will fly with artificial wings...
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Bl Devnath
Date: 6/24/2011 10:53:00 AM
Why my sense says to me, I don't know. I am inspired for as you agreed. Thanks for comment. bl
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