Mystic Rose Rose Poet Lyric

Moving Towards

Music by Sheldon King 

Open windows of my soul gliding in the knowledge 
of my yesterdays 
Here I am breaking down the gates, of all my defenses
it is now that my life commences 
Refrain: As I move towards, ... move towards 
 my sane....
Down valleys and lakes and rivers I journey 
no way to know which way to go
Walking through alleys of my tomorrows 
I leave behind all my happiness and sorrows.  
Refrain: As I move towards, ... move towards 
my flame...
Open windows of my soul, gliding in places 
where I've never been before ...
Here I am, dismantling my failures, setting sail 
Refrain: As I move towards, ... move towards 
the pouring, rain !

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Paige Hind October 17, 2025 at 6:57 PM Lovely- all the best, Mystic Rose Rose October 19, 2025 at 1:58 PM thank you for your comment dear Paige

Jay Narain October 17, 2025 at 10:38 AM o me, this poem is about rebirth or renascence — after years of defenses, failures, attachments, the speaker decides to open up, to let life begin anew. The journey is not linear or certain; the speaker doesn’t know the direction, but feels compelled toward something (sanity? flame? rain?). The act of dismantling, of letting go, is as important as any destination. The ending “setting sail” suggests a departure, an opening into unknown seas. Mystic Rose Rose October 17, 2025 at 3:23 PM Setting sail represents freedom new beginning and leaving the old behind. You have that right dear Jay, thanks for the lovely comment. In depth and beautiful

Anne-Lise Andresen October 17, 2025 at 9:28 AM - A poem that makes you happy, Vie Rose ... beautiful song :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs Mystic Rose Rose October 17, 2025 at 3:23 PM Thank you dear Anne, hope you have a wonderful weekend too. xo

sara Etgen-Baker October 16, 2025 at 5:18 PM enjoyed the inspirational and spiritual messages in your poem, dear Rose, hugs, Sara Mystic Rose Rose October 17, 2025 at 3:32 AM Thank you dear Sara , will visit you real soon :)

Yann Rolland October 16, 2025 at 3:01 PM beautiful , loved the melody and the nice l message to, thanks poet Rose Mystic Rose Rose October 17, 2025 at 3:32 AM Your welcome dear Yann, Hope your keeping well :)

Mystic Rose Rose October 16, 2025 at 1:55 PM https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VC8cV6QYvZQ&list=RDVC8cV6QYvZQ&start_radio=1