Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

Moving On

You told me that you loved me
You’d never let me slip away
That our love was true and forever
We’d get married one fine day

Making love for hours on a bed of silk and lace
I should have been more wary
It was never round at your place 
Looking back this sounds so contrary

I gave myself to you I gave you my trust
To me you were perfect; you were ‘the one’
But you weren’t in love with me it was only lust
I was just so naive, now sadly you have gone

I sit alone and reminisce of our first kiss
Dreaming of your bedroom eyes
Our lips came together, oh what bliss
I should have known it was all just lies

I’m ready to move on with my life
I hope a new love comes my way
Put behind me my hurt and strife
Tomorrow will be a better day

Jan Allison
17th September 2014

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Robin Davis September 25, 2014 at 10:59 PM Jan A roller coaster of emotion. Happy and joyous to sad and betrayal. Your heart went into every line. Thank you for the wonderful comment on my My Story poem. Jan Allison September 26, 2014 at 2:36 AM Thanks Robin. Thankfully it is a fictitious write on my behalf _ i just have to go with the flow of my pen and it takes over! Hugs jan xxx

Jim Mayrose September 21, 2014 at 8:43 AM I was truly moved, wonderful write, it was a pleasure to read.... Jan Allison September 21, 2014 at 9:10 AM Thank you so much for those lovely comments Jim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Don Johnson September 20, 2014 at 5:52 PM We seem to spend some time together, but then you flow away, something owed from whenever, the books are balanced hey.... perhaps... Jan Allison September 20, 2014 at 5:54 PM ooh nice rhyme there Don and thanks for taking the time to drop by and comment :-) hugs Jan xxx

Harry Horsman September 18, 2014 at 11:24 AM Oh this is brilliant Jan,,,,so many lessons to learn from this a way of life for so many folk today,,,,,love the positivity at the end..way to go.... Jan Allison September 18, 2014 at 11:29 AM Thanks harry - its purely a fiction write on my behalf i just go with the flow of my pen:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta September 18, 2014 at 5:07 AM Excellent write for the young people to give thoughts to what you say, Jan Jan Allison September 18, 2014 at 7:30 AM Yes I agree Dr Mehta:-) hugs Jan xx

Frederic Parker September 17, 2014 at 6:35 PM When people are young they can't read the signs, when people grow older they not only can read the signs they can read them in any language Jan Allison September 17, 2014 at 6:42 PM Oh so true Frederic thanks for the lovely comment:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne September 17, 2014 at 3:53 PM Excellent. Love it Jan. Jan Allison September 17, 2014 at 3:54 PM Thanks Maurice:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich September 17, 2014 at 3:37 PM Jan, I was thinking it was your marriage proposal poem, perhaps but I can see it is another fictional one that you do so well! (or it based on some reality?) you should see my marriage proposal poem which I won't post for a while. It is going to probably be titled: the Non Proposal. Jan Allison September 17, 2014 at 3:39 PM LOL you are getting to know me Andrea its pure fiction:-) Hugs jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen September 17, 2014 at 3:17 PM - What a great poem, Jan ! - well done my friend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison September 17, 2014 at 3:19 PM Thanks Anne Lise:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith September 17, 2014 at 3:13 PM Wow Jan this is great...You sure I didn't write this? :)....hugs Tim Jan Allison September 17, 2014 at 3:18 PM Must be your inspiration rubbing off on me I guess Tim - no idea why my pen took me this way:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance September 17, 2014 at 3:08 PM Yep I've been played by a few players like that. I know that feeling. Hugs xx Jan Allison September 17, 2014 at 3:16 PM But there are some gems around too Cas :-) love your poem its wonderful you could see beyond the way he was dressed and found your soulmate:-) Hugs jan xxx